Author: Steven Aitchison (408 Articles)
I am the owner of this blog. I am a Freelance Writer and write about personal development with my passions being belief formation, thoughts, perceptions and emotions. My number 1 priority is my family, and after that my aim is to help as many people as I can around the world to live their dream.
The street lights barley lit the empty, darkened road as yet another human slowly walked, looking around him wondering why he was there. Rows and rows of buildings with black doors lined the road. And then he appeared, the devil, dressed in a black suit, black shining shoes and a smile as wide as the golden gate.
“What is this place?” asked the human
“Your life!” replied the devil smiling excitedly “Your life, and all it’s darkest moments filled with regret, sadness and despair.” The devil led the human to one of the doors and motioned for the human to open the door.
Tentatively the human slowly opened the door and peaked at what lay beyond it. His mouth opened wide at the sight before him.
He saw himself in a beautiful house laughing and fooling around with his children and his wife looking at them in the background content and happy. There was his dream car sitting in the driveway, a dog barking excitedly running around and chasing birds on the lawn and neighbours mulling around doing their gardens. The human looked at the devil:
“What is this, I split up from my wife years ago?”
“Yes you did!” the devil replied, laughing and almost skipping to the next door. “Look in this one, look in this one.”
The human, puzzled, opened another black door. Again his mouth fell open. He saw himself again sunning himself on the deck of a boat with his family and friends around him enjoying time together. His son sat at one end of the boat fishing whilst his other son was sitting next to him reading a book. He closed the door with a heavy heart.
“I don’t understand” the human said looking into the eyes of the devil.
“Ah, most people don’t. I love it, I love it!” the devil could barely contain himself. “Try another one.”
The human opened another door and saw himself working in some kind of workshop speaking to some other people he did not know. He looked around and saw a sign which read ‘DreamHomes’. The human gasped, this was the business he had always dreamt of starting up and didn’t follow through with it. It had been a pipedream to him and although his wife had encouraged him to go for it he never got round to it, instead electing to work for another building company with long hours and low pay. It started to dawn on the human, this was his dream life he was looking at, all the doors contained elements of his dream life.
“Why?” was all the human could ask.
“Why show you this? because this is all mine, for every dream you didn’t act on, I stole it and started living it. I live millions of dreams and it’s wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.” The devil was almost skipping with joy. “You human’s haven’t a clue. You are put on earth to live for around 70 years, you go to school for 20 of those years, work for 45 of those years and suffer for around five of those years until you eventually die. Yeah, you have a few enlightening moments and you follow a few dreams, which annoys the hell out of me, but on the whole you are all pretty much the same. It’s wonderful, I get to live out all these dreams.”
The human, saddened by the devils words, kept walking and came to a white door. The devil stopped smiling and looked at the human. “That’s your door.” he said, “this is where you live.” The human opened the door and saw himself working on a building site, he was high up on some scaffolding just staring out into the sunset and at that moment he was catapulted back to the building site, no devil, no road, just himself watching the sunset. He looked at his watch, a few hours to go and he had to rush back to phone his son to ask him how his gig at the club went, his son had been playing in a band for a while and they were starting to get noticed. At that moment, he decided he was going to go to the club to see his son live instead of asking about it. He climbed down the scaffolding, walked to the site office, took off his hardhat and bid goodnight to the foreman.
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Interesting how you didn’t follow that ending up directly. But maybe it didn’t need that. The point was well taken! Earl Nightingale would be proud
in a strange secret sort of way.
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Thanks Darren, I did think about how I should end it and thought it best to leave it so everyone could finish it in their own minds.
This is a great piece. Very thought provoking. I like the sort of ending that leaves it opn to personal input. Makes it work for just about everyone I think. Nicely done! I’ll subscribe.
Your article is very interesting. I must say this is a great article i enjoyed reading it keep the good work.
Nice allegory – you don’t find those much anymore and I like how they leave it to the reader to reach conclusions.
There is no doubt that life is for living, but for the everyday man that can be a very hard concept indeed.
Everyone needs to try to do something for themselves or their family everyday, or the days merge in each other, the weeks go by, and you suddenly realise that another year of your life has gone by, one that you can never relive.
We are not put on this planet just to work, although that is how it feels sometimes, make a plan, grab a few moments, it will change your life, and that of your family.
While I definitely enjoyed the read (I love stories about the Devil), I couldn’t help but notice he seemed a bit too helpful in this particular tale. It would have been cool if at some point in the story, the Devil offered to let the man live his dream life in exchange for the rights to his soul. That’s when things start to get interesting…
Unforgettable.. It keeps reminding me that i should do my best to not to regret in the future.
I subscribed yr newsletter few weeks ago, n read about this devil’s article when it published, yet still delayed for so long to gv feed back, which i wont delayed and hesitate it anymore(it keeps reminding me that good story as this WORTH feedback), thx for yr effort that inspire us! =]
Love,
Adnan
Ps. It’s a really vivid story for me when its the red sunset at the construction site, coz im an architecture student =]
Thanks for the comments Adnan I really appreciate you taking the time out to give me your thoughts.
Nice Post
OK, now I’m gonna study to the math test so I won’t regret about not studying later.
Thanks.
Interesting article. Scary picture.
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What a great short read. I like that the story really didn’t end, you just piece together how he goes to his sons gig and presumably starts to enjoy life.